Chapter 3: Just a Bad Author
Back mountain!
A remote little courtyard.
"Big Brother is kind-hearted and will spare your life."
"Be honest. If you dare to run away, you will die!"
boom!
The door is closed and locked from the outside!
The fear and panic on Lin Ye's face disappeared immediately, and he even pouted at the door.
There are five minutes left on the countdown.
I am about to leave, and the hundred-day journey to the other world is over.
Thinking about how the Shangqing Sect would be terrified after he disappeared, it could be considered as revenge for the shoving and intimidation he had just received.
It's a pity that the dream of getting rich by returning to the modern era with antiques was shattered.
After wandering around the yard out of boredom, Lin Ye sat down at the foot of the bluestone steps, counting the number of gravels on the steps, waiting for his return.
3.
2.
1!
return!
The time panel returned to zero , and Lin Ye only felt a fainting sensation coming from his head. Everything around him began to distort. The next moment, his eyes went dark and he could not see anything.
When his vision was restored, Lin Ye immediately looked around.
The familiar bathroom, the familiar toilet, even the sitting posture is the same.
He is back.
Everything remained the same as it was before he traveled through time.
Lin Ye lowered his head and took a look.
It’s still fresh, time really hasn’t changed.
During the hundred days he traveled through the other world, the time in the real world was suspended.
Lin Ye breathed a sigh of relief. When he was in the other world, he thought about what excuse he should find to explain to his relatives and friends, but he could not find a perfect excuse. He was more worried that his relatives and friends contacted him and did not call the police.
In modern society, if a living person suddenly disappears, the police will definitely question him when he comes back, and he will not be able to justify himself.
Time in the real world was paused, saving him the trouble of explaining.
Lin Ye looked at his clothes in the bathroom mirror. He was wearing the servant clothes of Shangqing Sect, which meant that he could bring things from other worlds into the modern era.
Just when Lin Ye regretted missing an opportunity to make a fortune, the panel popped up again. This time, the panel had many more changes than before.
【Character: Lin Ye】
[Time in this world: 8032]
[Alternative World Time: 100 (Pause)]
In addition, there is a gear-like icon in the upper right corner of the panel. Lin Ye focused his attention on the gear icon, and an operation information immediately appeared in his mind.
This gear can turn according to his thoughts.
However, Lin Ye was not in a hurry to turn it. He would not do it before he figured out what impact the turning would bring.
"Panel, can you explain it?"
Lin Ye asked politely, but unfortunately the panel did not respond.
After thinking for a while, Lin Ye found a pen and paper. When he was thinking about some problems, he liked to write them down on paper, because when he only relied on his brain to think, sometimes it would not be so comprehensive. If he used a pen, he might remember the details he had overlooked by reading it several times.
[Two worlds, one is this world, and the other world. This is easy to understand. It should refer to the real world and the other world I traveled to.]
[These two numbers can be deduced from the fact that I spent 100 days in the other world. The 100 refers to the number of days I spent in the other world, and 8032 is the number of days I spent in the real world. From the moment I was born to now, the time is correct.]
What does pause mean?
[I traveled back in time, and the real world remained at the moment before I traveled back in time, which means that when I was in the other world, the time in the real world was paused. So now that I traveled back in time, does it mean that the time in the other world is paused? 】
After writing this, Lin Ye drew a horizontal line below it and added a note: [Highly likely! ]
[The panel did not disappear, and the number of days appeared again. Does this mean that I am not just traveling once, and it is very likely that I can enter another world. Is it just a thought, or shouting, or does it require special conditions to trigger it? ]
[Also, if I can enter another world, should I go in? If I stay there for a hundred days like before, I will be in danger based on my current situation in the other world.]
Lin Ye's pen paused. He was traveling in a body rather than a soul. If he died in another world, did it mean he was dead in the real world as well?
There are many issues that require him to think carefully.
After thinking for a long time, Lin Ye felt a little overwhelmed.
Damn!
forget about it.
Lin Ye threw the pen on the table, walked to the computer and opened a website.
[Paid question: I am a new author. I recently conceived a novel in which the protagonist can travel between two worlds. I will give you a brief description of the first few chapters. Let me tell you how it goes. Can you understand my setting? Do you think the setting is a bit too mysterious?]
The wisdom of the people is infinite.
This is what a famous person once said. Lin Ye is now going to use the wisdom of the masses to solve his problem.
He briefly mentioned the situation in the other world, focusing on the panel.
Where there is a lot of money, there must be a wise man.
Within ten minutes or so, the post received many replies.
[After reading the original poster's question, based on my many years of experience in writing novels, this book will definitely fail! Today's readers have no patience. A system is still mysterious and stuck in the era of online literature ten years ago. Ten years ago, if you traveled through time and space to get a golden finger, you had to write one or two chapters to describe the cause and effect. Now it can be done at will, simple and clear.]
[Actually, the OP is here to find inspiration. This type of dual-world story is easy to write. By reselling items from both worlds, you can become a dealer and easily reach the pinnacle of life. It's not that difficult.]
[You don't understand. This new author is just stupid. He wants to make the system mysterious, but he doesn't want the protagonist's IQ to drop. Now he's stuck. The protagonist can't find a necessary reason to go to the other world again. After all, the protagonist's current situation in the other world is very dangerous.]
[The eldest brother is probably going to rebel, so join them. With modern agricultural technology, they will definitely be able to achieve great things. If you don't rebel after traveling through time, what's the point? ]
[The above person makes a lot of sense. Store up food and wait until you become king. Bring modern agricultural and industrial technology over first, and then grow stronger.]
[Fuck... Isn't that the worker-peasant alliance...]
[The alliance of workers and peasants, the alliance of steel, Davari, please cultivate this red spark that will set the prairie on fire in another world. ]
[When workers and peasants unite, the red tide of steel will be invincible. ]
[Hahaha, decades later, dear Davari, if you want to chase that red star, go to another world .]
[Through the panel, through the world barrier]
[In the land of another world, a spark of fire is still burning]
[Wrong, the other world at that time was not a spark, but a raging fire. ]
[The black birds in the other world all inherited the red will]
…
As Lin Ye watched, he noticed that the screen suddenly turned red.
Refresh the page and a new answer appears.
[I am at Qidian. I just finished typing and saw the question from the author. As an experienced author, I would like to share some of my thoughts.]
[First of all, the topic's setting is double penetration, which is not a very novel setting. There are too many books of this type, and the most common mistake made by newcomers is that the wealth and power systems of the two worlds collapse. ]
[If you don’t pursue IQ and logic, this type of book is very enjoyable to write, but if you pursue online logic and offline dual stories, this type of book will be very tiring to write. ]
[After reading the answers above, if the questioner is really stuck and doesn't want to change it, I can give you a suggestion. The protagonist must go back. He may encounter some troubles in reality and urgently need to go to another world to solve them.]
[Of course, in order to show that the protagonist is not stupid, he should make all preparations before going there, to prepare for his own survival. ]
[If the eldest brother really wants to rebel, the protagonist, as a witness, can only choose to join in if he wants to avoid being killed. He can master some forging skills. A rebellion definitely requires a blacksmith.]
[This is just one aspect. It can also be medicine... food seeds, or even methods of training soldiers. In short, there is only one purpose, which is to let the eldest brother know that the protagonist has value.]
[Finally, let’s talk about the panel mentioned by the questioner, which is the system. ]
[The time and days on the panel are very simple, which are the number of days the protagonist exists in the real world and the other world. I am blindly guessing the role of the cheat code of the questioner. ]
[The protagonist returns to the real world, and the alternate world pauses, but this pause is not permanent, but only a hundred days at most, because the protagonist has stayed in the alternate world for a hundred days. If the protagonist still does not go to the alternate world after a hundred days, the time in the alternate world will return to normal. ]
[The same is true for the real world, but because the protagonist has lived in the real world for twenty-two years, the time in the real world is suspended for at least twenty-two years, which means that the protagonist has been in the other world for twenty-two years, and the real world is also suspended.]
When Lin Ye saw this, his eyes lit up, because he had a vague idea of this.
[Gears, this should be the key point. ]
[The crossing of the two worlds is the protagonist's chance, but it doesn't count as a golden finger. The golden finger is a gear. I don't know how the questioner will set it up, but if it were me, I would create a time comparison between the real world and the other world. This gear would most likely be able to speed up or slow down the passage of time in the two worlds.]
[Of course, it may be more complicated, depending on how the questioner sets it. ]
[From the protagonist's perspective, the first guess is easy to verify. Just stay in the real world for a day and see if the number of days in the real world increases by one day and the time in the other world decreases by one day.]
[Finally, let me summarize. The beginning is barely passable. As for how the follow-up is written, it depends on how the questioner writes it later. The questioner can add me as a friend and we can discuss things if there is anything.]
Lin Ye looked at the number sent in the private message and glanced at the other party’s WeChat name [九灯和善], but after thinking about it, he still did not add the other party as a friend.
This is what really happened to me, it is not a so-called novel.
How much help can a lousy author give to himself?
